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Decided to start a new setting, yea not my old idea, something new. Something I have wanted to do for a while now. I hope that everyone likes this! Also hoping to write more, adding more to this series! 

Let me know!

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phrooglefa Featured By Owner 5 days ago
Thanks for more favs
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phrooglefa Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015
Thanks for the fav
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Lhikan Featured By Owner Edited Feb 13, 2015
Hi.

Not that I don't like your writing, but could you maybe stop using "would" all the time? It's annoying as hell to read a story written entirely in the subjunctive. Switch back to the indicative mood; cut the "would", just use normal past tense verbs.
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Adipose-Rex Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Happy birthday
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LostSoulMalachi Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
Happy girthday to you :)
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ZobeQ Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
Happy birthday!
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EmissaryOfRainbows Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Happy birthday
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kimgluttony Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
Thank you so much!
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EmissaryOfRainbows Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!~
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EmissaryOfRainbows Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the watch
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